Responding to criticism

How do I feel about the work I produced?

I think that the work I produced is interesting and it's something different to what everyone else in my group was doing. I think that I could of made my work better if I had enough time to add the finishing touches to it. I would of liked to make it perhaps a bit longer and using the green screen effect change the background so it's more exciting and appealing.

My video responses:

Looking at these comments a lot of the people that have viewed my animation like it and think that it is well made and looks very creative.

The comment from Sally Leishman says 'I would change it to make it longer with a longer storyline' and I agree with her. I was trying to make a more longer and interesting storyline but because of the lack of time I had to cut it a lot shorter than I had originally planned.

In my blog the first storyboard that I started out with lasted 47 seconds long and then by the end the animation had turned into 23 seconds including the title and credits.

The comment from R. Welsh says 'the only suggestion I would have would maybe to include better music' which I think is a fair comment. Not everyone can like the same music but personally I think it fits the video as I wanted it to. The music is fast paced just like my video.

R. Welsh also commented saying that he liked the introduction and the credits. They were really simple to make and I think I could of made it better but I'm glad that one of my audiences responses like it.

This is part of the title that he was referring to where the words come onto the screen to match what the lyrics are saying.

This is also a main part of the introduction that he talked about where the window opens to show the creatures looking into which then goes into the storyline of the angel and devil getting prepared to fight.

My credits that he is referring to is really simple and each line pops up at a different time. 

R. Welsh also comments saying how he likes the colours and how the characters look like Nicki Minaj.

These are the bright colours that I used for my extravagant characters.

I think that the feedback that I got is fair and I agree with a lot of what they are saying.
Looking at the feedback, if I was to complete this assignment again I would make sure to make the storyline more interesting and longer.

I think this a video that is pretty similar to what I was going for because it uses bright colours and it's a girl singing towards a music video. I think that mine is animated more smoothly and she uses some still pictures but it suits the video.
Also her main character looks similar to mine.
This is her main character:

And this is my main character: